User:UNique04/A Hero Ain't Nothin' but a Sandwich (novel)/Mak345 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?  UNique04
 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=A_Hero_Ain%27t_Nothin%27_but_a_Sandwich_%28novel%29&diff=1187661362&oldid=1150928787#mw-diffpage-visualdiff-cite_note-7
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * A Hero Ain't Nothin' but a Sandwich (novel)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead


 * The Lead is good, detailed, and gives the reader insight onto the themes of the novel.

Characters


 * Character list is detailed and provides information about multiple characters in the novel
 * "and fights for his turn in to the principal for his drug intoxication in school. " Confused about the meaning of this sentence.

Content


 * The Plot section could use more development and detail.
 * There could be a theme section added to address common themes/symbols in the novel

References


 * References are relevant and recent; could use some more sources to support content of the novel