User:UUSOMedStudent2026/Trichophagia/Ics0621 Peer Review

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UUSOMedStudent2026
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Trichophagia
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This sentence "Of people with trichotillomania it is very common to have some behaviors of trichophagia, with estimates ranging from 48-58% having any form of oral habit, 33% biting or chewing, and 4-20% actually swallowing and ingesting their hair." is a bit confusing at the beginning and could use a little rephrase I think! Also, in the next sentence you say "person" but I think you mean persons.

At the end of the intro paragraph you say "bloakcages" which I assume is meant to say blockages.

I think in general some of the phrasing is a bit wordy. For example here "Signs and symptoms of trichophagia can be varied dependent upon the individuals behavior patterns." I think you could change it to something like this "Signs and symptoms of trichophagia are variable depending on the individual's behavior patterns." This is just personal preference though!

Overall this is great! My only suggestions would be rephrasing to make simpler as I mentioned above