User:UabBG26/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Spiritual distress

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I choose this article because it has many to quotes and it needs to be shortened.

Evaluate the article
Instead of the "Nursing Diagnoses being seven bullet points of quoted text, I recommend that the author just briefly summarize the whole section since that is more than a paragraph being quoted if taken off bullet points. Overall the article is very informative but is filled with so many quotes that it would be nice to read words from the author and how the author uses tone, punctuation and so on.