User:Uambra/Sexual arousal/YamilBar Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Uambra)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Uambra/Sexual_arousal?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Sexual arousal

Evaluate the drafted changes
The importance of orgasms...: I would only change the frequency of citations to be more often but overall this sections/draft keeps everything in an informative manner and has thorough resources and citations to properly back its claims to be understood as scientifically sound and informative. Great job!