User:Ughhwhatevertay/Sarah Rachel Russell/Awwillia Peer Review

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Overal, your article about Sarah Rachel Russell is excellent and really insightful about her life, history, and all other components. Learning about Russell's major impact has been very informative, and I appreciate the thorough detail you gave in your post. But I have to make a helpful comment about the text's excessive length. Although the amount of information is undoubtedly helpful in comprehending Russell's past, the article reads more like an essay than a Wikipedia article. Without compromising the complexity of the material, comprehension might be improved by simplifying the text and emphasizing the presentation of important topics. However, it is clear that you took great care to provide all relevant information, so readers would be able to fully understand Russell's historical significance.