User:Uhhlea/The Aquadolls/Aodum58 Peer Review

General info
Uhhlea
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Uhhlea/The Aquadolls
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Uhhlea/The Aquadolls

Evaluate the drafted changes
I really liked your article I have a few suggestions I think in the information that one with your 3rd source you leave out the "brief description" and just got straight in to the description. I think in the information included with your 5th source and others try not to bring up other articles the citation is or that. I think so your paragraphs can flow more you do not need to say "an interview with the band". I like your direct approach and I also like the amount of information you provided. I think if I was reading this as an ordinary person I would not be able to guess the perspective of the author. The words used in this feel neutral it does not feel like it is catered to any side. This article does focus on a lot of positive and not really the negative. Most of your sources are cited with a reliable sources. I think it is really good that all of your information is cited.