User:Uiseon1012/Post-traumatic stress disorder/Casseygray Peer Review

General info
Uiseon1012
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Uiseon1012/Post-traumatic_stress_disorder?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

LEAD

I think your draft is very informational and you're doing great in researching different things related to PTSD. I have put in a few things that I think would be helpful but they are in parenthesis so completely optional!

CONTENT

Again I think content is great! You are doing great at researching multiple newer studies on PTSD and putting that info into your draft.

TONE AND BALANCE

You seem to be fairly neutral which is great.

SOURCE AND REFERENCES

I think you have your sources laid out well and they seem to be fine.

ORGANIZATION

It seems to be just kinda putting info in at the moment vs organizational, but I think it will get better as time goes.

MEDIA

No media as of yet

OVERALL IMPRESSIONS

I think it's coming along great!