User:Uiseon1012/Post-traumatic stress disorder/Mgjones2 Peer Review

General info
Uiseon1012
 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Post-traumatic stress disorder
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Uiseon1012/Post-traumatic stress disorder
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Risk Factor: The addition to the paragraph provides valuable information about the diverse groups of individuals at risk for post-traumatic stress disorder (PTSD). By including specific examples, such as combat military personnel, survivors of natural disasters, concentration camp survivors, and survivors of violent crime, the paragraph effectively illustrates the wide range of life-threatening situations that can lead to PTSD. Overall, this addition contributes significantly to the characterization of the spectrum of PTSD and strengthens the awareness of the diverse populations vulnerable to this condition.

Trauma: The draft addresses the influence of social systems in perpetuating victimization, particularly regarding gender bias in concealing sexual violence cases. However, the paragraph would benefit from improved organization and clearer presentation of the findings. Additionally, citing specific sources for the statistics provided would enhance the credibility of the claims made. Overall, the work contributes valuable insights into the gendered nature of trauma and PTSD but may require further refinement for better clarity and support.