User:Ulmer087/Patient advocacy/Eschied Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ulmer087


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Ulmer087/Patient advocacy - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Patient advocacy - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
In the sandbox, you are showing me what is wrong with the article but you are not adding to it or fixing it. How are you going to include getting a patient advocate. You need to make a change to the article. instead of telling what is wrong, try to fix what the error is.