User:UmidjonHope/Evaluate an Article

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Uzbek language

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I am so excited about this article, and reading the grammar and the history of your native language from non-native speakers' point of view is so exciting for me. This article really matters to me because I grew up speaking and learning all the tiny details of my native language, and I have plenty of information about how my language works. I looked through this Wikipedia article, and I am pretty surprised that extremely little information is provided in this article regarding the origin and the grammar of the Uzbek language. Nevertheless, this article is also related to my linguistics class, and I want to improve this article as much as I can because it is really, really important to me.

Evaluate the article
First of all, the introductory paragraph contains tons of outdated information about the current speakers of the Uzbek language and very little data provided regarding the origin and the history of the Uzbek language. Furthermore, so much information in the following sections, like Grammar, is not up-to-date; the Uzbek language acquires many changes every year thanks to the development of the technological era and the new non-Uzbek words that can't be translated to the Uzbek. In the history section, Ali-Shir Nava'i, Shaybani Khan, and  Ubaydulla Khan were mentioned, and they are the greatest poets in the entire history of Uzbekistan; however, there were also many great poets and philosophers that significantly contributed to the development of Uzbek, and they should also be mentioned in this article. Further, the link for 'Ubaydulla Khan' is not working. And the Writing sections of this article needs immediate evaluation because almost all the information provided in this area is neither outdated nor historically wrong. The phonology section should be expanded with more phonological features of the language because the phonology of the Uzbek is not only about the four-line information provided in this section. Subsequently, there is no any information on the phonology of the consonants. The grammar section is way more outdated and should immediately be evaluated. I am surprised that only nouns, verbs, and pronouns are explained in this section. Where are the adjectives, adverbs, and numerals?? The possessive cases part needs more data on this topic because there are more than 20 suffixes that make the possessive cases of the Uzbek language. The word order part was written from only one person's point of view. The word order in most of the sentences is indeed SOV (subject-object-verb); however, you can use VSO (verb-subject-object), SVO (subject-object-verb), and OSV (object-subject-verb) orders can also be used, and there are not grammatically wrong. The number of speakers section should immediately be updated because it is so outdated, and all the data provided in this section is inaccurate. The following pages must also be updated because they are outdated too.