User:Ummtahanan18/Social Media/Jcurtis4 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Ummtahanan18


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Ummtahanan18/Social_Media?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social media

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is sufficient and truthfully needs no changes relevant to the edits you are making. The tone and balance are also neutral and need no additional work. All of your sources are up to standard and the links do work. Your edit is concise and well-organized. It could benefit from the addition of an image. Your content is a strong addition to the overall article regarding social media.

I would alter your first sentence so it is easier to read; "The copyright owners must issue licenses to social media platforms such as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, and Youtube in order for them to be able to publish your content online."

Update; In order for social media platforms such as Facebook, Instagram, Twitter, and YouTube to publish your content online, they must be issued a license from the copyright owners.

The T in YouTube is also capitalized.

I do not understand this sentence. Perhaps try to not use the word being defined in the definition- " A license is a legitimate right that a licensor grants to a license "

Spelling error 8 lines into your Article body- " they all give the social media siter permission "

I assume you meant to type sites.

Grammar error 8 lines into your Article body- " utilize your copyright work however "

I assume you meant to type copyrighted work.

Shorten lines 3-4 in the second paragraph of your Article body- " let's have a look at "

Replace that phrase with the word examine. (i.e. Examine the Terms of Service)

Add quotations around the quoted Instagram Terms of Service in line 4 in the second paragraph of your Article body