User:Umnawahal/Inuit Sign Language/Llill2 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Hoh34, Brian redmond Jr., Ivanatheslayer, Umnawahal


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Umnawahal/Inuit Sign Language


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Inuit Sign Language

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall, I think the main article is looking good. The content on the article is neutral and organized in a clear way. I think the one area where the article could be improved is in talking more about the language itself. For example, I noticed that in the sand box and article someone wrote about that there were 33 recognized phonetic hand shapes, and I think it would be really great if you could could incorporate more information like that (e.g., grammar, handshapes, phonetics, etc.) in the main article. Also, I know we're technically not supposed to use pictures, but maybe you guys could talk to Jill and see if you can because I think it would be really cool if the article had some pictures of the different phonetic hand shapes. Another thing that I think would be important to work on is on adding more to your guys sandbox, even if you don't end up incorporating that information in the main article. I think that way it will be easier to see and organize the information you guys have from your sources, and see if there's a place to incorporate it into the main article or not. Other than that, keep on contributing to your sandbox and article, and remember to try and move the information in your sandbox to the main article.