User:Umnawahal/Inuit Sign Language/Lramir54 Peer Review

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Lead

The lead to this article is written very well as it does a great job of introducing what Inuit Sign Language is and where it originated from. It introduces the later parts of the article in the lead by stating there has been recent interest and studies focusing on this language which is a good lead to the rest of the information given in the article.

Content

The content on the Inuit sign language page is very concise and valuable. The categories are very useful to understanding and further research on the language. History, status, varieties, and grammar are some of the categories listed which are relevant choices to separate as their categories. Although there could be more recent references listed as there are only 3 references shown.

Tone and Balance

The tone of this article is unbiased and very informative. There is a balance of different categories that all explore important aspects of the language. It also gives attention to the lack of information due to parts of the language being lost in history. There are a few areas where reliable information is threatened when it mentions rumors that can not be proven which is not factual information.

Sources and References

The sources are reliable and have a large amount of useful information however the article could benefit from additional credible sources and recent sources as well, although it is understandable that it is hard to find good sources as this language is not well documented.

Organization

The article adequately arranges its categories with important sections and provides ample information and explanations for each section. Examples are given verbally and explained orderly. The references are all in appropriate spots and references are accurately at the bottom.

Images and Media

There is one image that shows one of the geographical locations in this language used. Other than that, there are no images or media present for this article which impairs the ability to learn the most about this language. Suggestions for images and perhaps videos that show this language in action can benefit immensely from the educational components of this article.

Overall Impressions

Overall this article is very well put together and very informative. There could be some more inclusion of additional academic sources and imagery to see different signs visually. Expanding the visual component of the article will benefit the article as sign language is understood visually. The article is concise and organized. The article has a coordinated structure that has useful information in enlightening categories.