User:Umnawahal/Inuit Sign Language/Mmysli Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * I am reviewing the Sandbox Draft of Inuit sign language and their live edits on the page.

(Reviewed by: mmysli)

(Work by: Umnawahal, Ivanatheslayer, Brianredmon jr and Hoh34)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Umnawahal/Inuit_Sign_Language?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists): Inuit Sign Language
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists): Inuit Sign Language

Evaluate the drafted changes
The Sandbox is a bit of a hot mess and it includes a wide variety of topics: which is good! All of these could be made into important contributions to the current Wikipage. However, there needs to be a more set direction for each of the topics presented. Perhaps further research or more group collaboration is required to help get the Sandbox ideas more organized.

On the Sandbox page is also appears the same source was cited twice: when citing something on Wikipedia you don't need to cite the same source after it's already been used. Make sure to utilize the "cite" tool and you will have the option to "re-use" a source that has already been cited. It will all be included in your references!

I like that there's a "Variety" category included in the Sandbox but sadly nothing is written there as of yet. Since there isn't much written on the current Wikipedia page about it, I think this could be a great thing to expand upon, especially when discussing regional dialects of Inuit Sign Language. I don't quite understand what is meant by the "Status" category so more elaboration in that category on the Sandbox would be needed.

The edits made to the current page are under the Grammar section. It's very informative however instead of referring exactly to what the author, Schuit says: I would try to instead put his words into your own and add a citation.