User:Umnawahal/Inuit Sign Language/Softstarkid Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

umnawahal, ivanatheslayer, brian redmond jr, hoh34


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Umnawahal/Inuit_Sign_Language?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Inuit Sign Language

Evaluate the drafted changes
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although there isn't a plethora of additions to the draft, there have been significant additions to the main article. the lead is very informative on the history and culture of inuit sign language. it gives brief overview of the following sections and gives just enough information to pull you into the article.

most of the information used in the article is from the past ten years which makes it up-to-date and relevant. i would say that the information provided in 'history' and 'status' is related to an underrepresented population because inuit sign language is used by nomadic, deaf, indigenous groups which is like three buzzwords of underrepresentation.

i believe that although this article could lead to a point where someone might try to sway the audience or have implicit bias, there is no overtly persuasive tone present in the article.

as a whole the sources provided are decent and diverse and are also all dated to the 21st century. the sources are also all peer-reviewed journals or articles. links work.

i think it was a bold choice to put history before grammar in terms of overall organization but i think that it works because you can't really understand the sign language without first understanding the history of how it came to be.

no images.

not a new article.

i do think that the article is more complete with the added information. they seem to be making good use of the provided resources to help the expansion of the knowledge of inuit sign language.