User:Umnawahal/Inuit Sign Language/Zohaib Alvi Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Umnawahal, Ivanatheslayer, Brian redmond jr, Hoh34


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Umnawahal/Inuit Sign Language - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Inuit Sign Language - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
I felt that the draft was well written. The lead may require some updates in order to provide the necessary flow into the changes. The content was all relevant to the topic, and the content was entirely up to date. There did not appear to be any content which was missing or that did not belong, and it does deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps, which is the underrepresented group of Inuit sign language users. I felt that the article was neutral and was unbiased. The viewpoints were balanced well for the content which was added and I did not believe that the content attempted to persuade the reader towards any singular viewpoint. The new content was backed up by reliable sources but some sections had no citations. I also thought the article was well organized and concise, clear, and easy to read.