User:Unclebenny 713/Kazuma Kaneko/Angiegarciaa Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Unclebenny 713


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Unclebenny 713/Kazuma Kaneko


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Kazuma Kaneko

Evaluate the drafted changes
I believe you have done a good job so far by adding formulated sentences with neutral and relevant information. You added deep and insightful information about the person that your article it's about and that information can be very helpful to others who are looking up this name on the web. I could see that the current page without your changes has little to no personal information about Kaneko and if you keep it up you will have a strong article by the end of this project. Adding information about his childhood, career and notable works was a smart move from your part, since that's the kind of information that it's most of the time display on the wikipedia pages about artists who contribute to the art industry. A good way to make your article even stronger could be by adding images, and linking notable words to other pages.