User:Uncommonart/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Varnette Honeywood

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I was assigned to work on this article for a class assignment.

Evaluate the article
This article provides a simple outline of the artist Varnette Honeywood. Everything in the article is relevant, the tone is neutral, however there are numerous gaps of information that could be added. There is a lack of context surrounding Honeywood's family influence and childhood experiences. The article could improve on specifying Honeywood's artistic style, influence, themes in her work, and add examples of her famous works. The lead section focuses too much on Honeywood's experiences working with Bill Cosby, does not provide a clear overview of the article. The structure and wording of the article could be rewritten. This article is part of multiple Wikipedia Projects, but there is no conversation history on the talk page. The sources used for this article are limited, there is only one academic scholarly source used, and the link to the first source listed does not work.