User:Underwaterbubble/Marguerite de Witt-Schlumberger/Historynerd831 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Underwaterbubble)


 * Link to draft you're review
 * Marguerite de Witt-Schlumberger
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Underwaterbubble/Marguerite_de_Witt-Schlumberger?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes)
Make sure all the foreign words are italicized. It would be helpful to the reader if the article was divided up into relevant sections. For example her Career could be broken up a little more. Some of the sections are a little long. Also the dates jump around a bit in the article. Placing her life into more of chronological order would be helpful.