User:Universal9449/Eastern glass lizard/King-Joma Peer Review

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Universal9449
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Diet Section

"opportunistic feeders" is a good describer of the eastern glass lizard, the explanation of what opportunistic feeders it could be shorten to describe a omnivore.

In the following sentence the beginning "A range" could be replaced with Examples as the first sentence previously explains what the eastern glass lizard eats in a large general range and in the second best fits as examples of specific things it eats

Reproduction Section

"eggs tend to hatch around late summer" This piece seems off tone compared to the rest of the text. Maybe separating the insert into a new sentence or rephrasing like "hatching tends to occur around late summer"

Reference

The second reference leads to the homepage of the source instead of the source itself, to make it easier for those to look through it link directly to the information you are siting (https://www.virginiaherpetologicalsociety.com/reptiles/lizards/eastern-glass-lizard/index.php)