User:Unknownusername2000/History of the Catholic Church in Mexico/SRobert99 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Unknownusername2000


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Unknownusername2000/History_of_the_Catholic_Church_in_Mexico?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * History of the Catholic Church in Mexico

Evaluate the drafted changes
The content added is good and relevant, however, you could add some examples of the claims made in certain sections to increase the quality. Specifically, the line about Liberation Theology movements led by women. Maybe you could give some examples of women that led these movements and the impacts they made. Also, the shift in the way of thinking among Catholics. How did their ideology change?

The tone of the draft seems unbiased for the most part. The last line in the second paragraph could be seen as biased, was Liberation Theology universally accepted as beneficial? It could use a little bit of rewording to make it not seem like that is a claim you are making but instead a fact accepted by those in Mexico.

The list of references all seem credible and reliable, except for the fifth one (just kidding). Good balance of sources from different points in time. The links didn't work for me for some reason but I looked them up and they all seemed good, not sure if it's an issue on my end or something with the formatting.

The organization is pretty good presenting information in chronological order, some topics could use expanding as they feel incomplete but the writing style seems fine otherwise. No grammatical errors as far as I could tell besides some missing punctuation