User:UnluckyRabbitsFoot/“Punch and Judy” by Jan Svankmajer (1966)/Swimcoach2! Peer Review

Your lead is really good and introduces the rest of the article well. For the plot, I was a little confused on the first few sentences so maybe do a little bit more of an introduction into what the film is about. As far as explaining the plot, you did a good job going into specifics about it. I would suggest maybe doing a little bit more background and history of the film and maybe the director? Other than that it is a really good and interesting article! I love how unique the topic is. Also, if you could find a picture or something like that, you could add that as well. Good job!

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