User:Unsophiesticated/Eva Anttila: she/her, Finnish, 1894-1993/Mmmsawyer333 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? (provide username)
 * Unsophiesticated/Eva Anttila
 * Link to draft you're reviewing:
 * User:Unsophiesticated/Eva Anttila: she/her, Finnish, 1894-1993

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Has the Lead been updated to reflect the new content added by your peer?
 * Yes
 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic?
 * Yes
 * Does the Lead include a brief description of the article's major sections?
 * Yes
 * Does the Lead include information that is not present in the article?
 * No
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed?
 * Concise with the perfect amount of detail

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic?
 * Yes
 * Is the content added up-to-date?
 * Yes
 * Is there content that is missing or content that does not belong?
 * Maybe add a little more detail discussing her teaching experience (like one more sentence about when/how this occurred - if possible!)
 * Does the article deal with one of Wikipedia's equity gaps? Does it address topics related to historically underrepresented populations or topics?
 * I believe so

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral?
 * Very neutral
 * Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * No
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * Not really - maybe when stating the Textile award she one you could address which exhibition it was that lead to "70 of her tapestries were displayed in this exhibition" - maybe bring in her notable works
 * Does the content added attempt to persuade the reader in favor of one position or away from another?
 * No

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information?
 * Yes, especially one interesting archived article on the artist. Most sources are in Finnish but still seem reliable for the most part.
 * Are the sources thorough - i.e. Do they reflect the available literature on the topic?
 * Yes
 * Are the sources current?
 * Yes
 * Are the sources written by a diverse spectrum of authors? Do they include historically marginalized individuals where possible?
 * Seems to be both Finnish and American authors, so, yes.
 * Check a few links. Do they work?
 * Yes

Organization
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added well-written - i.e. Is it concise, clear, and easy to read?
 * Yes very much so
 * Does the content added have any grammatical or spelling errors?
 * Nope
 * Is the content added well-organized - i.e. broken down into sections that reflect the major points of the topic?
 * Yes! I'm not sure if the "Further Reading" section is necessary but it doesn't hurt anything.

Images and Media
Guiding questions: If your peer added images or media


 * Does the article include images that enhance understanding of the topic?
 * Links to images, yes, so yes and yes
 * Are images well-captioned?
 * Not in article
 * Do all images adhere to Wikipedia's copyright regulations?
 * I believe so
 * Are the images laid out in a visually appealing way?
 * ^Not actually present in article - only links

For New Articles Only
If the draft you're reviewing is a new article, consider the following in addition to the above.


 * Does the article meet Wikipedia's Notability requirements - i.e. Is the article supported by 2-3 reliable secondary sources independent of the subject?
 * Yes
 * How exhaustive is the list of sources? Does it accurately represent all available literature on the subject?
 * I believe so
 * Does the article follow the patterns of other similar articles - i.e. contain any necessary infoboxes, section headings, and any other features contained within similar articles?
 * Yes!
 * Does the article link to other articles so it is more discoverable?
 * Not that I see

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * Has the content added improved the overall quality of the article - i.e. Is the article more complete?
 * What are the strengths of the content added?
 * How can the content added be improved?

Overall evaluation
Really great work overall! Everything was written in a very concise and neutral way which made all the facts about the artist extremely digestible. Besides maybe adding a sentence or two of more detail I'm not really sure any foundational changes need to be made!