User:Upuslay/Climate communication/Asircar Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Upuslay


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Upuslay/Climate communication


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
The suggested areas of improvement seem very thorough which I was very impressed by. Overall, I think the changes are really well done and they were extremely interesting to read! I would do a quick grammar check especially within Primary goals of Climate Communication, Sentence 2, where it should be 'it's' not 'its'. I don't have the exact timeline but I would expect a bit more clarification on the facts and timeline within the History section--what do you mean by "research was mainly ..."? What is the time constraint here? Also, I'm not sure if this is entirely true since there's examples of climate change public opinion research being done in India in 2011. With the Primary Goals of Communication, this seems like something that I would expect to have a few more different options and not something that is so widely accepted which is not reflected in both the number of sources cited, and alternative lists. The remaining subsections of Understanding and Perception, and Engagement and Action seem very thorough, precise and well written, and I'm excited to see this article in its final form!