User:Urdadsgf/Postcolonialism/Khaxton Peer Review

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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Urdadsgf/Postcolonialism
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Postcolonialism

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall the article is well written and adds important information. The only thing that could be improved is some grammar aspects.

"The long-lasting effects of colonialism will be faced by them, such as identity issues, structural injustices, and the elimination of indigenous knowledge and customs." For this sentence consider "They will face the long lasting effects of colonialism, such as identity issues, structural injustices, and the elimination of indigenous knowledge and customs".

"The harsh effects of colonial rule and the homogenizing effects of globalization have development to movements in recent years." For this sentence consider changing it to "..effects of globalization have led to movements in recent years".