User:Uriahdavis/sandbox

The two articles that I took a look at was the FEMA article and the article on Abimael Guzman.

The Fema article: The first sentence in the article should not be there. There was some direct plagiarism in the article. There is some cleaning up that is need on the acting head as to people are labeled as such. Info in the article is very much outdated as their has been disasters since 2007. Their are statements in Hurricane Katrina that needs citation. When talking about the what the committee stated in there report the citation link is broken. This is repeated during the snowstorm of 2006 that the citation link does not lead to an article.

Abimael Guzman: There are statements in the article that needs citations in multiple areas. Some of the citations links are broken or are not found. This article seems like it directly from an encyclopedia. Some citations are just screenshots of articles except going directly to source. Their is a lot of information about the organizations actions which give the appearance this is more about Shining Light then the person. The Maoism link on the side is distracting from the article itself.

Female suicide bombers:

I'm looking to update this page with proper citations and try and add a bit more content from more locations where this has occurred.~

sources i plan to use:

Sawicki, John. "A tragic trend. Why terrorists use female and child suicide bombers." Health progress (Saint Louis, Mo.) 97.4 (2016): 38-42.

Straub, Verena. "The making and gendering of a martyr: images of female suicide bombers in the Middle East." Image Operations: Visual Media and Political Conflict (2016): 137.

Berko, Anat. The smarter bomb: Women and children as suicide bombers. Rowman & Littlefield, 2016.

Narozhna, Tanya, and W. Andy Knight. Female Suicide Bombings: A Critical Gender Approach. University of Toronto Press, 2016.