User:Urmilav/California housing shortage/Avaellea Peer Review

General info
urmilav
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Urmilav/California_housing_shortage?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):California housing shortage

Evaluate the drafted change
The content added was very relevant and reading through this I honestly was like wow, it was just so fitting and flowed very well. The content was concise and clear and had relevance to the UC Berkeley community and you did a very good job in tying in that information with the other history and information provided from the wiki article. There was no bias present and I feel like Urmila did a good job with incorporating her own research and knowledge within the Wikipedia text keeping all the information neutral. The article did deal with equity gaps and the new info added did touch on this. Urmila had expressed laws that were but in place by NIMBY in terms of restrictions for homeless individuals and revealed how this was causing huge displacement and poverty.

The content added had one article from 1992 but I felt that it provided relevance because People's Park, which she went to explain about in her sandbox has been apart of the Berkeley area for a long while and she provided history with using this article. the other article was from 2016 which I think is relevant for sure and added more detail and facts to the additions made to the original article. The links did work and they were two different articles and different authors providing a spectrum.

The content was well written, concise, clear and all of the above. The flow was very good and everything just fit. The content added in my opinion added more to the wiki article and made good connections to things happening within the Berkeley community.

I enjoyed reading this sandbox, well done!!