User:User2002368/Communication for social change/Chloe Hongyi Wu Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

User2002368


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:User2002368/Communication_for_social_change?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Communication for social change

Evaluate the drafted changes
The Lead gives an accurate introduction to "Communication for social change", but the whole Lead is too long, and the editors have expanded too much detail in this introductory part. My suggestion is that it could be appropriately cut and improved to summarize the concept more concisely.

The following sections describe the Millennium Development Goals and communication for social change in different regions. But we can see that they are still relatively vacant. The Africa section lacks citations, and the India part has not yet added text.

The narrative of the article is a neutral narrative of facts, not biased towards a particular point of view. The editors cite reliable, secondary source of information, but they were released in 2011 and are not a recent source of information.

In addition, the writing of this article is clear and well organized.