User:VP0200/Nissen fundoplication/Emisj Peer Review


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User: VP0200


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 * Nissen fundoplication


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 * Nissen fundoplication

Lead: I believe the Lead is very concise and has the appropriate amount of information present.

Content:

History- It could be beneficial to add more information about what the results from the Swiss Medical Weekly article were.

Indications- It could be beneficial to add some links to other Wikipedia articles for certain terms in this section such as esophagitis, stricture, ulcer, endoscopy, Barrett's esophagus, adenocarcinoma, PPI etc to provide further education.

Technique- The images in this article are very helpful. This section was very informative.

Mechanism of Relief- This section was very informative!

Effectiveness- It could be beneficial to compare this procedure to other procedures to relieve treatment-resistant GERD (if there are any).

Complications- This section was very informative.

Tone and Balance

The content added was very neutral and presented an unbiased view of the procedure.

Sources and References

Used good, current sources.

Organization

All of the information is well-organized and flows well.

Images and Media

Images that were included were very informative and aided in the comprehension of the article.

Overall, this article is very informative and I believe would be beneficial to any reader. Good job!

~Emisj

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