User:VQuiche/Online piracy/Adriel824 Peer Review

Peer review
This is where you will complete your peer review exercise. Please use the following template to fill out your review.

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? VQuiche's article on online piracy.
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:VQuiche/Online piracy

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * Does the Lead include an introductory sentence that concisely and clearly describes the article's topic? This article perfectly does what the lead is supposed to and does so perfectly by defining the topic and is supported by citation links.
 * Is the Lead concise or is it overly detailed? The lead is very concise but sufficient nonetheless.

Content
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added relevant to the topic? There was a good amount of content that was added to the entire article. Two new sections were added and more details were added into sections such as the history and benefits. The content is up to date and supported by linked citations. All content seems to be relevant.

Tone and Balance
Guiding questions:


 * Is the content added neutral? The article's content contains a neutral language all throughout and never uses language that reflects any personal view or bias.

Sources and References
Guiding questions:


 * Is all new content backed up by a reliable secondary source of information? All content is backed up by reliable sources. The sources stem from academic books and articles from reliable publications. All the links works just fine, I would only possibly suggest looking over some sources because they might be a little outdated.

Organization
Overall, the article received good additions to the existing sections, where as there were also new sections added which are very organized with a table of contents and also various source links.