User:VaZque20./Environmental health/Tedamala012 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

VaZque20.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Environmental health
 * Environmental health

Evaluate the drafted changes
Peer review (repost)

In my opinion the article has a good structure, however there can be a bit more expansion in the concerns section pertaining to everything that is listed. Maybe some definitions and statistics. I can see that the Information section contains information about TEHIP, since it's a source for environmental health information, but are there any other reputable organizations and resources along with it? If so they may be added after that one paragraph. If needed, the article can include a history section for how environmental health as a study evolved, but this is just a suggestion.