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In the article, Prince George's Community College, most of the facts have reliable references. I would say that these sources are not completely neutral since they are coming from the community college's website. However, this is an appropriate website to get the information and facts from because there are not many other options to get reliable information about this college other than its own website. Other reliable sources that are used come from Maryland's government website and a reliable newspaper, The Washington Post.

Everything in the article was relevant to the article topic. It included many important aspects of the college that people should know about. The description of it really gives the viewer basic important knowledge about the school in a simple way. The article was neutral because the tone of it was very informative and was not trying to be biased. The information was presented in a clear and concise manner that emphasized the purpose of the article.

In some citations, the links did not work. When I clicked on a link, I would be directed to the website, but it was most likely out of date since there was an error and it said the page could not be found. This happened on more than one reference.

I think the information was paraphrased well. I did not notice any close paraphrasing or plagiarising. The order of the information was organized well. The article started off with the history of the community college and then went off to talk about its mission. It also talked about the academic, student life, and athletics, which are all important aspects of the school. The content was very straightforward and it was easy to understand.

I notice the pictures in the article and I think they are used appropriately and help visualize the things that are talked about. It has a good balance with the information since there are not too many pictures. Overall it was a very informative article that gives important facts for viewers to know.

Prince George's Community College Article:

Why'd you decide to add something to this article?

I noticed that the article did not include the different places that the college offers. It does mention that there are clubs and specific organizations, but it does not mention that it has a track and field, tennis courts, weight training room, study rooms, computer labs, print services, and many other places where students can hang out.

What did you want to add or correct?

I wanted to add the many different student services and places where students can hang out.

Revised article: Prince George's Community College

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