User:Vahinishori/Human trafficking in the United States

Hi Vahini!

Your article on Human trafficking in the United States looks good! I think you do a good job of making sure that there aren't a lot of direct quotes but enough sources are spread throughout as needed. The tome seems neutral for the most part - I get that it is hard to not sound like you are against human trafficking as it is such a terrible and scary thing.

Within the first section that is just general information about human trafficking, it seems as though the second paragraph about where it occurs gets a little too specific too quickly. There are sections that also talk about that so maybe the first section could be more of a a general overview.

Also, it is really interesting how many subsections there are pertaining to different big cases, locations where people are most vulnerable, and state by state descriptions. However, it appears as though a lot of the sections have the same general information in the description so I would suggest maybe adding more detail to each to really show how different they are from each other or minimizing down them as a list with short descriptions under a broad title.

Lastly, it also appears as though there is not too much recent policy or action written here, which I understand could just be a reflection of reality. However, it might be useful to look into if anything recent has happened in terms of working to solve this huge problem or actions to prevent in different social institutions.

Overall, this was great! Very informative, the citations look great and there are many sources listed.

- Amy Scheidecker