User:ValB13/Railroad ecology/ATireOnFire Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

ValB13


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Railroad ecology


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Railroad ecology

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Broadly, this is very good work. It is well-sourced and informative. There are two empty sub-headings, "Barriers" and "Wildlife Mortality", which are either devoid of content or are not conveying that they are subheadings above the material presented below. The relevance of tree clearing (vertically and otherwise) are logically coherent but lack explicit consequences, especially compared to the most extensive writing about verges. Broadly, though, this is very fine work.