User:ValB13/Railroad ecology/Mikaelaswildlife Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

section: Invasive species

Spider is missing an 's' - should be spiders

Can you define railway verge?

sentence: "Aditionally, when constructing a new railway, vegetation is removed, soil is bared, and water is managed, creating ideal conditions for invasive plants to implant."

^What do you mean by water is managed?

section: Management

sentence: "Management practices should always take into account native species to not harm them."

^ should be - "so as not to harm them"

section: wildlife-train collisions

"Wildlife species from smaller birds and mammals to deer and large mammals such as elephants may be killed in collisions with trains running on railway tracks"

^ instead of to deer it should be like deer

What is rail entrapment?

sentences: "Road traffic occurs more often during the daytime, while train traffic can be higher in nighttime. There is a large proportion of electrical trains, leading to lower emissions near tracks than gas vehicles on roads. Trains can be much quieter than road vehicles. The size of the railway and its verge is normally much smaller than the size of a road and its verge"

Do you have citations for these?