User:ValkyrieOfWater/Ernesto Giménez Caballero/K.Kubs Peer Review

General info
ValkyrieOfWater
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:ValkyrieOfWater/Ernesto_Gim%C3%A9nez_Caballero?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Ernesto Giménez Caballero

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I think that this is a great start to develop and correct the existing article about Ernesto Gimenez Caballero, especially since it was clear that whoever had previously worked on it might have had English as their second language and Spanish as their first (to be able to comprehend the sources to translate for the work). Your changes already make the article more comprehensible and I definitely think more can be added to the pre-existing avant-garde section of the article since it is lacking before moving into the fascism section. So, I am glad you are inserting more information - especially as is relevant to our class.