User:Vamptiger/This Book is Good/James8854clerk Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Vamptiger


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * This Book is Good


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

This article draft gives a very good overview of the book. Before the book summary, there isn't a lead section which gives an overview of the book itself and its context within the wider world, like its history and the controversies which have arisen around it. However, if this is an already existing article, I am guessing such a lead maybe already exists?

The document does not list any sources for this article and there are only a couple of citations in the writing, but I assume the citations are listed in a separate bibliography.

The content of the article is very good and it gives a nice overview of the contents of the book for each chapter. Your draft seems very well organized and is easy to follow.