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=Proposed edits to Wikipedia's Revelation article for Your ENG1300= The current article (April,2015) that I am working on doesn’t have all the contents, so it is in need of almost everything. The following categories could all be added:
 * 1) Plot
 * 2)  Point of View
 * 3) Characters
 * 4) Setting
 * 5) Diction, Tone, & Style
 * 6) Themes
 * 7) Symbol

Reading List

 * OLLMAN, L.(1997). Art review; reflecting on flannery O'connor's themes. Los Angeles Times Articles
 * Kennedy, . (2011). Literature. An introduction to fiction, poetry, drama, and writing. 12th ed. Upper Saddle River: Pearson Education (US.
 * Bloom, H. (1999). Flannery O'Connor. Broomall, PA: Chelsea House Publishers.
 * Ollman, L. (1997, Nov 28). Art review; reflecting on flannery O'connor's themes. Los Angeles Times Retrieved from http://search.proquest.com/docview/421174086?accountid=87314

Original
Before Mary Grace succumbs to the sedative, Mrs Turpin feels the need to confront her: "What you got to say to me?" she asks Mary Grace. She looks into Mary Grace's eyes and has a feeling that Mary Grace has a knowing of her and a message to give. "Go back to hell where you came from, you old wart hog," whispers Mary Grace as the sedative takes effect and she is taken away. Mrs. Turpin finds this comment very unsettling, and she wonders if it may have been a message from God, who may be trying to intervene in her life. Hating the notion, and still upset, she returns home

Revised
Before Mary Grace succumbs to the sedative, Mrs Turpin feels the need to confront her: "What you got to say to me?" she asks Mary Grace. She looks into Mary Grace's eyes and feels that Mary Grace knows her and has a message for her. "Go back to hell where you came from, you old wart hog," whispers Mary Grace as the sedative takes effect and she is taken away. Mrs. Turpin finds this comment very unsettling, and she wonders if it may have been a message from God, who may be trying to intervene in her life. Hating the notion, and still upset, she returns home.

Original Contribution
List of Character

In the short story, O’Connor introduces a couple characters in Revelation which is: Mrs. Turpin who she is very conversational, judgmental and obese woman. She making bad judgment about all the people that are in the doctor’s waiting room .She distinguish herself as a White rich woman and categorizes others as inferior. In the waiting room she meets a pleasant lady that she had conversation with .The pleasant lady was with her daughter name Mary Grace studying from a book of Human Development while her mother having a conversation with Mrs. Turpin, Grace started to get angry at her. She tosses a book at Mrs. Turpin and calls her “old wart”. Mr. Claude is Mrs. Turpin husband is a good, quite spouse. Mr. Turpin injured his leg bring them to the doctor office. Pleasant lady is the mother of Mary Grace had a pleasant conversation with Mrs. Turpin Mary Grace is the college student daughter of the pleasant lady; Grace was studying Human Development in the waiting room got angry at Mrs. Turpin. Grace attacks Mrs. Turpin by tosses the human development book at her and call her old wart hog.'''. Grace is restrained and given a sedative by the doctor and a nurse. White trash woman is at the doctor’s office with her son. Mrs. Turpin made bad mental comments about them. Dirty toddler with a runny nose lying across two seats in the waiting room and is softly affronted by Mrs. Turpin that the child's dirty, rude mother doesn't make him move over for Mrs. Turpin to sit. Doctor gives Mary Grace a sedative Nurse work at the doctor office call an ambulance for Mary Grace.