User:Vandelay Industries Biologist/Myxococcaceae/Scienceislife22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Vandelay Industries Biologist


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Vandelay Industries Biologist/Myxococcaceae - Wikipedia


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Myxococcaceae - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * The first sentence is concise and give a good overview of what the article is about.
 * More information is needed about the bacteria and proper sections should be made.
 * The information added is indeed pertinent to the topic at hand.
 * There is no detailed description of the material added for other sections.

Content


 * There are no visible sections.
 * I would add Bacteria Morphology as one and Origin as another. Maybe Environmental Impacts.
 * The information you want to add is very good, concise, but it needs a bit more organization and division.
 * I think the bullet points you want to add will be a key addition to your information.
 * There is only one link. You should add more refences from where you have retrieved the information.
 * You should also add hyperlinks to important words that may need a bit more information.
 * It is neutral and balanced.
 * I think it's a good start, but more organization is important to complete the article.