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'''This paragraph is the edit that I am adding to the Rousseau page: ''' Rousseau’s ideas of human development were highly interconnected with forms of mediation, or the processes that individual humans use to interact with themselves and others while using an alternate perspective or thought process. According to Rousseau, these were developed through the innate perfectibility of humanity. These include include a sense of self, morality, pity, and imagination. Rousseau’s writings are purposely ambiguous concerning the formation of these processes to the point that mediation is always intrinsically part of humanity's development. An example of this is the notion that as an individual, one needs an alternative perspective to come to the realization that they are a 'self' Vandolin25 (talk) 08:52, 23 April 2015 (UTC)

Vandolin25 (talk) 04:55, 5 March 2015 (UTC)

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This is a good start of mapping your ideas, Vandolin. Help your reader by making clear where exactly each bit is intended to go and also which sources you are using for each section. Begin practicing the mark-up for references here using the "cite your sources" button that is next to the "sign your posts" one. Also, try practicing with headers to help organize this page.