User:Vanished user 7449738/Escape from L.A./Nyaronya Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I am reviewing Neutralplaid's work.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Here is the draft I am reviewing.


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Here is the current version of the article.

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Many of the changes made sense and was neutral. These changes help make the article feel more complete. I especially like the additional information you put in Home Media, as I felt like that should've been in the article in the first place as it has been several years since their release.
 * One label that does not feel like it is contributing to anything is the DVD releases section, as there is nothing under it. I am not sure if it was intended to be put there.
 * Suggestion: remove the DVD releases label and just have the Blu-ray releases title by itself. If there aren't any regular DVD releases, then the label is redundant.
 * Idea for adding an image would better help visualize for the Production section, however unsure of what you want to put an image of.
 * Some references (when looking at the reflist), have red in them which indicates that there is an error with how you cited them. You would want to fix that.
 * Two words in particular, "superweapon" in the Plot section and "postapocalyptic" in the Filming section are marked red (spelt wrong). Maybe hyphenate those words?
 * I am unsure what the Anchor template is for in the Production