User:Vapyun/Salomon's House/Mysamyra Peer Review

Peer Review (by Eva Campney)
Hey Val! I just have a couple of concerns.

According to the project guidelines, we weren’t supposed to make a separate wiki page, but input into an existing page. This is easily fixed if you take this section and insert it into the New Atlantis page.

You need some more external research in order to corroborate your data. There are some claims that are not cited and can be considered opinion (ie. Solomon’s House being an inspiration).

I’m also not sure if the word count is including of direct quotes, that’s definitely something to check with Prof. Higginbotham.

But a very clear definition of this crucial part of the narrative!

General info

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