User:Vaupini/Censorship in Myanmar/Smaf-250 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(smarf-250)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Censorship in Myanmar


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
This article, was nicely done, it has a lot information which is good.

I did realize that, some external links, weren't really necessary, or they would just repeat theme-selves.

I also felt like some, parts of the article were too summarized, for my liking, i wish they had given a lot of information.