User:Vaupini/Choose an Article

Article Selection
Please list articles that you're considering for your Wikipedia assignment below. Begin to critique these articles and find relevant sources.

Option 1

 * Article title : ( Censorship in Myanmar)
 * Article Evaluation
 * I believe that this article can be improved a lot. There are not a lot of information in contents. It does talk about censorship in different era but I think more information or small details can be added in those sections. I also think that it will be better if there are sections that talk more about the current situation/ latest censorship. The political reform sections could be done in two sections. The contents only contains history and that could be expand more. In terms of tone, the article focuses mainly on the majority population ( Burman) but I didn't see censorship of ethnic groups. Since it is the country with 135 ethnic groups, I think it will be good to mention about censorship among those groups as well.
 * Sources
 * 1) https://collegeofidaho.on.worldcat.org/search/detail/7354607913?queryString=Freedom%20on%20speech%20in%20Myanmar%20&clusterResults=true&groupVariantRecords=false
 * 2) https://collegeofidaho.on.worldcat.org/search/detail/277180125?queryString=Military%20in%20Myanmar%20&clusterResults=true&groupVariantRecords=false
 * 3)https://collegeofidaho.on.worldcat.org/search/detail/1193978817?queryString=Ethnics%20group%20in%20Myanmar%20&clusterResults=true&groupVariantRecords=false
 * 3)https://collegeofidaho.on.worldcat.org/search/detail/1193978817?queryString=Ethnics%20group%20in%20Myanmar%20&clusterResults=true&groupVariantRecords=false

Option 2

 * Article title : Ethnic joke
 * Article Evaluation
 * This article doesn't have a lot of information. The lead section explains what is the ethnic joke and its implication. The contents section mainly focus on one major topic, which is academic theories of ethnic joke. I think it will be interesting to see ethnic joke from different cultures or how different cultures see ethnic jokes and its relation to wider cultural contexts or any political implications.
 * Sources
 * 1) https://collegeofidaho.on.worldcat.org/search/detail/36430742?queryString=ethnic%20joke&clusterResults=true&groupVariantRecords=false
 * 2) https://collegeofidaho.on.worldcat.org/search/detail/794701035?queryString=ethnic%20joke&clusterResults=true&groupVariantRecords=false
 * 3) https://collegeofidaho.on.worldcat.org/search/detail/40776714?queryString=ethnic%20joke%20&clusterResults=true&groupVariantRecords=false
 * 2) https://collegeofidaho.on.worldcat.org/search/detail/794701035?queryString=ethnic%20joke&clusterResults=true&groupVariantRecords=false
 * 3) https://collegeofidaho.on.worldcat.org/search/detail/40776714?queryString=ethnic%20joke%20&clusterResults=true&groupVariantRecords=false

Option 3

 * Article title : Culture of North Korea
 * Article Evaluation
 * The lead section explains very well in general about the culture of North Korea. Its introductory sentence clearly describes the article's topic. Later in the lead section talks about arts, literature, about the people and exposure to the world, propaganda, etc. The contents does have main topics about the country's culture. There are more topics that are not mentioned in the lead section. Some topics in the contents can probably be extend more. I can also see that there are some information in the lead section that are not mentioned in the contents. I believe that this article can be improved in terms of contexts and may be structure ( contents) as well.
 * The lead section explains very well in general about the culture of North Korea. Its introductory sentence clearly describes the article's topic. Later in the lead section talks about arts, literature, about the people and exposure to the world, propaganda, etc. The contents does have main topics about the country's culture. There are more topics that are not mentioned in the lead section. Some topics in the contents can probably be extend more. I can also see that there are some information in the lead section that are not mentioned in the contents. I believe that this article can be improved in terms of contexts and may be structure ( contents) as well.


 * Sources
 * 1) https://collegeofidaho.on.worldcat.org/search/detail/742517282?queryString=culture%20of%20north%20korea%20&clusterResults=true&groupVariantRecords=false
 * 2) https://collegeofidaho.on.worldcat.org/search/detail/53482640?queryString=culture%20of%20north%20korea%20&clusterResults=true&groupVariantRecords=false
 * 3) https://collegeofidaho.on.worldcat.org/search/detail/428895721?queryString=culture%20of%20north%20korea%20&clusterResults=true&groupVariantRecords=false

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