User:Vebrown/Miss Gay Memphis/0diego0 Peer Review

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Vebrown


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 * User:Vebrown/Miss Gay Memphis


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Lead
The lead section was very good and straight to the point. It does a great job of explaining the topic and setting up the rest of the article.

Content
The information in the article is well researched and backed up. Everything was easy to read and follow along with.

Tone and Balance
I think this did a great job of staying neutral.

Sources and References
All of the sources worked well, and seem to be reliable. They're also placed at good spots.

Organization
I think the format and order of the sections works great. However, I think there are a few sentences in the article that can use additional commas, or editing to help the flow of longer sentences.

Images and Media
It is difficult to find pictures that can be used for these articles, and I understand it might be even harder to find some for new articles. Hopefully you can find a few photos that are allowed on Wikipedia.

New Articles
The article meets the notability requirements, but can definitely use more attention.

Overall Impressions
I like how this article is going so far, and think it has good information supported by good sources. I think it could use more information, doesn't have to be a new section, about the subsequent pageants. It could include how eventually it was renamed, by who it was renamed, and the different sponsorships associated with it. This, and maybe more information, can be found in the third source that was used. Some of the sentence structures could be looked over. Overall great start, especially since it's a new article!