User:Vega93x/Pilar Agüero-Esparza/MacSar.04 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Vega93x)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Vega93x/Pilar Agüero-Esparza
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead


 * The lead is very informative and concise

Content


 * The article offers relevant information that offers insight into the life of a person from an under-represented community.
 * The article is missing information about the artist's exhibition(s), artworks, and other details about their art style. Therefore, I would suggest taking time to find and include information about these details, if you can find them. It is important to remember that any detail helps. I would advice you to look up any events or institutions that the artist is (or has been) involved in, so that you can find information about their work and subject matter.

Tone and Balance


 * The tone is neutral and unbiased

Organization


 * The article does not have any official subheadings or categories, so I would suggest breaking up the information in parts (i.e. Early Life and Education, Artworks)
 * After the lead section, I would advice you to add a heading entitled "Early Life and Education" that applies to the second paragraph of the article.
 * The article is easy to read and offers succinct information.

Sources and References


 * The article refers to the minimum three reliable sources.
 * I would suggest looking for scholarly articles about the artist, or any event or exhibition that they were apart of.
 * I would advice you to look for more thorough sources. Are there any scholarly sources about any of the peers the artist has worked with, any exhibition they were involved in, any public works, or any other forms of activism related to their art?
 * The article includes informal footnotes, so I would suggest that you create official citation footnotes using the "Cite" tool.



Overall Impressions


 * The article successfully offers clear, impartial, and relevant information about a notable artist.
 * The article still needs official footnotes.
 * The article still needs the "Early Life and Education" category heading.