User:Vejvančický/Archive 1

Josef Suk
Thanks for your additions. I just made a few corrections to make the English more idiomatic. Welcome to Wikipedia! Ksnow (talk) 11:36, 27 April 2008 (UTC)Ksnow

Václav Talich
Thanks for your note about Václav Talich. I have corrected some of the English that you had written, and also corrected the reference header. Your additions are nice. After I made my corrections, I must say that there are some things that we are not allowed to say on wikipedia, just as some examples. I think that you are a great admirer of Václav Talich, which is very understandable. The situation with wikipedia is that we must be objective when we work on articles, especially with people or subjects that we like. We cannot be "fans" and just write anything. Ideally, the wikipedia entry presents just the facts about a person or subject. Then it allows the people who read the article to come to their own conclusions and judgments. I hope that you enjoy your work here. DJRafe (talk) 00:16, 28 April 2008 (UTC)
 * With the accusations of collaboration, you said that these were "senseless". That is a very strong word in English, and we cannot use such words, however true that they are.  You must simply say that "the charges were refuted", or something like that.  You must also provide a citation.
 * You also called him the "most renowned" Czech conductor. Whilst lovers of Czech classical music know that Talich was very famous, we cannot say that he was "most renowned", because other people can say that about other conductors.  It is difficult sometimes to choose just one such conductor, and that is why it is best not to use such words.

Janáček Quartet
Hi and thanks for your message. I will certainly take a look at the article for you. It's good having someone to contribute articles on Czech-related music.--Casadesus (talk) 03:28, 2 May 2008 (UTC)

Are you interested in Czech opera?
The Opera Project have many articles on Czech operas. Perhaps you might like to help us develop them - and correct the accents! Regards. --Kleinzach (talk) 03:41, 2 May 2008 (UTC)

The Stubborn Lovers
Hi. I've made some small edits but it looks very good. Thanks very much! --Kleinzach (talk) 13:56, 7 May 2008 (UTC)

King and Charcoal Burner
Hi. Thanks for this. Looks good. I've done a basic edit. Best. -- Klein zach  03:06, 26 May 2008 (UTC)

Proposed deletion of Ludmila Peterková
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Janáček corrections
Moc vám děkuju! I sincerely appreciate the corrections to List of compositions by Leoš Janáček as my Czech language skills are insufficient. I have also created composition lists for Josef Suk and Pavel Haas (and soon also for Smetana). I'm sure there are Czech language errors on those pages as well. If you have a chance to look them over sometime, it would be appreciated! Thank you also for you work on Janáček and others. Hrdinsky (talk) 02:47, 3 June 2008 (UTC)

Dvorak symphonies
Hi, Vejvančický; I really like your contributions to the third, fourth, and fifth Dvorak symphonies. Thanks. I don't see anything wrong with grammar.

However, please note that that the movements have been numbered with a "#" symbol. You don't need to add the numbers again to signify the movement. Please take a look at how the numbers work. Anyway, thanks for your contributions to the articles! — Andy W. (talk/contrb.) 16:11, 8 June 2008 (UTC)

reference closing
The problem was that the reference was not closed with a "/ref". That did indeed break the page more than I would have guessed. Easy to fix. Cheers. DavidRF (talk) 18:03, 8 June 2008 (UTC)

Rafael Schächter
OK. Now done. -- Klein zach  23:07, 17 June 2008 (UTC)

Reply
No problem, that was my first copyedit so I hope I didn't change the meaning of anything. I'll look at Osvobozené divadlo as well! Have a good day. §hep  •   ¡Talk to me!  13:56, 22 June 2008 (UTC)

Czech classical music
I'll have a look very soon - thank you. We may indeed wish to work on translating some other articles besides, if you like - certainly there are gaps in the Czech music biographical department that need filling on en-Wikipedia. Schissel | Sound the Note! 15:15, 20 July 2008 (UTC)

Humoresques
Thanks for your note. I'm just doing my thing, trying to make the place better one edit at a time. Do you know which of the other pages you authored (listed on your user page) still need some English grammar checking? I try to be gentle when I do it. :-) (PS. Prague is beautiful, I wish I had spent more time in Czechia.) Magicpiano (talk) 18:43, 13 August 2008 (UTC)

Hi again, thanks for the links. I have a few specific suggestions of things that you should do when writing new articles (or even when checking over old ones):
 * compositions should have on the talk page
 * composers should have on the talk page
 * composers and performers should (in addition to ) also have on the talk page
 * the biography banner should probably include the following parameters
 * living=yes if the subject is alive
 * listas=Lastname, Firstname

I'm uncertain if there should be an infobox for articles about composers or performers -- there's lots of discussion on the subject.

When you add citations, use citation templates (like, , ). I'm currently working on redoing the citations for Winterreise, you can look at how I'm doing it here, there are several ways to do it worked into the source there. This is hard to do without the materials in hand, which is why it's better if the editor who adds the references does it.

That's all for the moment -- I'll look at the text of those articles more over the next week or so. Magicpiano (talk) 15:11, 15 August 2008 (UTC)


 * Hey, thanks for the star! You might check the note I left on Talk:Emil František Burian.  The language in this one is a bit difficult, and I think the article really needs more substance, given that he seems to have been a somewhat important cultural figure. Magicpiano (talk) 14:36, 27 August 2008 (UTC)

Legendy
Hello Vejvančický: You've done great work on Dvořák, Janáček, and others. Thank you.

The English in the first sentences on the Legends page is unclear and I'm not sure how to fix it. Maybe I can help you make it better.

Original:

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Is this what you mean?

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It's not appropriate to use the Příbram link for Vysoká u Příbramě, is it?

Hope this helps... Hrdinsky (talk) 02:16, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

Zdeněk Fibich
Would you mind proofreading the Czech on the List of compositions by Zdeněk Fibich page when you have the opportunity? Thank you, Hrdinsky (talk) 13:42, 21 August 2008 (UTC)
 * Vejvančický, those changes are now very obvious to me! Thanks so much for your help! Hrdinsky (talk) 16:24, 21 August 2008 (UTC)

Laterna Magika
Thank you for your additions, they're very good, I don't feel I have to change much at all. Have you considered joining the Czech WikiProject? The DominatorTalkEdits 16:33, 30 August 2008 (UTC)

Youth (Wind Sextet)
Hello Vejvančický, in this article someone has written 'the clarinettist, because of a broken key string only pretended to be playing'. But clarinets don't have strings... Can you clear this? Glatisant (talk) 08:48, 3 September 2008 (UTC)

Hi. Under some of the clarinet keys is a little spring, indispensable for the playing, and probably that spring was broken. I´ve found the source again, it´s typo there. My source (the score) says it´s key string. I´ve used the formulation without careful checking. Thank you for your notice, I´ll fix it. Vejvančický (talk) 09:19, 3 September 2008 (UTC)

Janáček
I think your additions to Janáček are excellent. Glatisant (talk) 18:30, 12 September 2008 (UTC)

Karel Husa
Hello Vejvančický, I revised the list of compositions for Karel Husa. Would you please proofread the Czech titles when you have an opportunity. Thank you. Hrdinsky (talk) 22:17, 20 September 2008 (UTC)
 * Thank you so much! (-: Hrdinsky (talk) 17:04, 21 September 2008 (UTC)

Jakub Hrůša
Thanks for the additional information on Jakub Hrůša, and adding the information on Tomáš Koutník. I cleaned up the grammar in the article, which I hope you don't mind. Did he attend the gymnasium in Brno? It was not clear. Thanks again, DJRafe (talk) 00:14, 26 September 2008 (UTC)


 * I added the information about his father to the Jakub Hrůša page. If I understood the next part of your last message correctly, I don't think that Petr Hrůša is famous enough in English-speaking countries that he should have an English-language wikipedia page.  However, I don't know how famous he is in the Czech Republic and Slovakia, so it would be a decision of Czech wikipedians if he is famous enough that he should have a Czech-language wikipedia page.


 * It is no problem about the English grammar, since the hardest thing is to find reliable information for wikipedia pages. Fixing grammar is very easy.  For comparison, I cannot speak Czech, so that I would never dare to edit any page on Czech wikipedia :) .  Thanks again, DJRafe (talk) 17:11, 27 September 2008 (UTC)

Sound help
I would like to add the sound help (e.g. ) with Czech pronunciation to the Czech music related articles, but I simply don't know how. . . . Vejvančický (talk) 09:54, 29 September 2008 (UTC)


 * Someone left this answer of my page: You can either use  or if you don't want the IPA you can use.


 * Does that help? -- Klein zach  23:45, 30 September 2008 (UTC)

Petr Hajek
čus ten ref na ten první požadavek je tohle, a na druhý taky, snad medialní odbor akademie ved staci i na anglickou wikipedii....doplnis toto tam? nebo mám sám, dal jsem to do externich protoze refovat ceskym textem mi prislo na houby--H11 (talk) 21:14, 1 October 2008 (UTC)

Your remark?
Kleinzach, I´ve left a short remark with a question on Dvořák´s "featured sound" above. Best. Vejvančický (talk) 08:37, 1 October 2008 (UTC)


 * Yes. but where is it? Thanks. -- Klein zach  22:42, 1 October 2008 (UTC)

Asrael symphony
Hello Vejvančický, thanks for your nice message, and thanks for all your excellent articles about Czech music. Stfg (talk) 18:34, 2 October 2008 (UTC)

Dvorak - Ten Biblical Songs
I'm not sure we have enough new blood to re-evaluate it at the moment, but we should once we do. May I suggest that you join in on Featured sounds for now,. to help evaluate the new content, and, if you can, to find new, higher-quality content? I don't think we should look for perfection yet, but we can insist on reasonably high standards while still making sure the project gains the necessary critical mass to eventually attract the best-quality work. (If noone knows about us, where is the top-quality work to come from, after all) =) Shoemaker&#39;s Holiday (talk) 13:07, 16 October 2008 (UTC)

DYK for Saint Ludmila (oratorio)

 * Congratulations! Very cool! I love doing projects like this. Let me know if I can help in the future! Hrdinsky (talk) 13:57, 23 October 2008 (UTC)

Jan Zdeněk Bartoš a Ludvík Čelanský
Thanks for your review of the Bartoš page! Hrdinsky (talk) 04:53, 3 November 2008 (UTC)
 * The Čelanský article look great! I really appreciate being able to help!  It was an honor.  I don't have all the information that you have about him so if I've changed something that is not quite correct, please "undo" it.  It would be informative to add the instrumentation to more works on his list of compositions (i.e. ...for Soprano, Baritone, Mixed Chorus and Orchestra; ...for Soprano and Piano; etc.) Is it possible to add the photograph of Čelanský to the page? Thank you for the barnstar.  It is sincerely appreciated. Hrdinsky (talk) 17:01, 5 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Is the photo on this website of Čelanský? Hrdinský (talk) 18:17, 6 November 2008 (UTC)

Thanks!
Thanks for the star. By the way, for the Biblical songs recording, I'm open to having it reviewed as a removal candidate, but it might be best to wait until Featured sounds starts on the main page, just so we get some new blood in to review it. I'm trying to get that sorted, it's just a matter of getting the new templates done. Shoemaker&#39;s Holiday (talk) 10:10, 5 November 2008 (UTC)

Your DYK submission
Hello! Your submission at the Did You Know nominations page has been reviewed. There still are some issues that may need to be clarified. Please review the comment(s) underneath and respond there as soon as possible. Thank you for contributing to Did You Know! &mdash;Politizer talk / contribs 18:03, 8 November 2008 (UTC) &mdash;Politizer talk / contribs 23:24, 6 November 2008 (UTC)

Ktož jsú boží bojovníci
Do you know anything about "Kdoz jste Bozl bojovnici" [sic] in the Smetana section of the Symphonic poem page? There seems to be variety of spellings. There's an English page entitled Kdož jsou Boží bojovníci and the Czech Wikipedia offers Ktož jsú boží bojovníci. The only reference that I have on hand has "Ktož jsú boží bojowníci". Hrdinský (talk) 07:54, 7 November 2008 (UTC)

RE: Czech Classical Music
I will try to help, but I have limited time to spare, so my corrections, if needed, may be rather delayed. Vltava 68 (talk  contribs ) 07:05, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

DYK for Film Festival Zlín

 * Actually, I have only very little in common with this article. I just wanted to support a new user and his/her fine first article (Zlín International Film Festival for Children and Youth). I added a few inline citations and nominated it. My hook was later changed :-)) --Vejvančický (talk) 07:38, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

Freddyboytoy
Yeah, I suspect vandalism too. 'Confusional' is an excellent word, by the way! [ roux  » x ] 23:28, 8 November 2008 (UTC)

František Drdla
Hello Vejvančický: There are still 2 concerns on the Drdla page. I'm not sure of the exact meaning.
 * “He performed at the concerts in Europe (1899-1905) as well as in America (1923-1925).” – The problem is with "the". In reading the previous sentences, the reader doesn't know which specific "concerts" you are referring to.  Is this sentence translated from Czech?  Are the "concerts" solo performances (with orchestra, etc.)?  Would this sentence possibly be better as “He performed in Europe... ” or combined with one of the previous sentences: “A well-known concert violinist, Drdla toured throughout Europe (1899-1905) and the United States (1923-1925).”  ...But then what is the constructive reason for mentioning the specific years?  Were those the only years he performed extensively?  What about the years from 1905 to 1923??
 * “In 1927 the Austrian president awarded Drdla the professor degree.” ...Again, the reader doesn't know what "the professor degree" is.  I think it would be better reworded or explained.

I hope that you can make sense of what I just wrote. I just reread it and I'm not even sure. (-: Let me know if I can help. Hrdinský (talk) 01:17, 10 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Vejvančický, Thank you for elaborating on the information you have. I think it helped me to make a decision about the translation.  We need to connect the dates we have with the respective concert tours and leave the Austrian presidential honor ambiguous.  Thanks again! Hrdinský (talk) 16:34, 10 November 2008 (UTC)

Ceska Wikipedie
Az ted jsem se tam asi po mesici prihlasil a videl jsem tvuj vzkaz. Dekuju za opravy v jazyce, ja cesky mluvim dobre ale co se psani a cteni tyce- to jsem mel jen asi rok a pul v ceske zakladce ale chtel jsem trosku rozsirit tu zatim celkem slabou ceskou verzi. Omlouvam se za diakritiku, nemam ceskou klavesnici! The DominatorTalkEdits 06:51, 10 November 2008 (UTC)

DYK for Ludvík Čelanský

 * Congratulations! ...and Thank you. Hrdinský (talk) 04:02, 12 November 2008 (UTC)

noam sheriff
I wanted to know if it is possible for you to help me write in different langueges on the composer noam sheriff. I had seen the large amount of project which you helped. this composer is very well known and although he preforms around world with the best orchestra symphonys, his poorly writen in wikipedia. Can you help me? - rachel —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mahler1234 (talk • contribs) 16:52, 15 November 2008 (UTC)


 * Thank you very much! yea, this photo is a bit funky, but you can imagine how you feel after wrestling with an orchestra... did you here about this composer before? If not, on this june he going to conduct the czech phil. with "revivel of the dead". its an amazing piece. so again, thanks!! Rachel —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mahler1234 (talk • contribs) 21:55, 16 November 2008 (UTC)


 * Hi again, I don't know how to put a permition? anyway, Noam Sheriff himself gave me the permition, so how do you do that? about jewish composers, their is also Ulmann that has an amazingt music.. but from the Israeli composers their are also Paul ben-haim and yeheskel brawn, that are realy good.  —Preceding unsigned comment added by Mahler1234 (talk • contribs) 10:22, 21 November 2008 (UTC)

Freddyboytoy
Hi Vejvančický, I completely agree with you about Freddy, but WP:AIV is probably the correct forum. Best, AlasdairGreen27 (talk) 20:53, 18 November 2008 (UTC)
 * Hi there. I only alerted the user at User talk:Freddyboytoy as you may have seen. He's not your standard vandal, so I would not block him. Bearian (talk) 22:56, 18 November 2008 (UTC)

František Škroup
Hello Vejvančický, I have added a list of works to the František Škroup page. Would you mind looking over the Czech titles when you have a moment? There are a couple of items that I question, for example, references list the vocal work Dobrau noc [sic]. Is this spelling a dialect or misspelling? Also for Drátenjk (as printed on the Czech-published score) or Dráteník (from the Czech Wikipedia). How would you translate "Drahomíra"?

Děkuju mockrát, Hrdinský (talk) 18:41, 20 November 2008 (UTC)

Hello Vejvančický: Thank you for helping with the Škroup article. I couldn't image how to translate "Drahomíra", but since it is a personal name, translation is unnecessary. Your knowledge is most helpful in this area and your explanation of old Czech spelling was informative. Thank you. You have also drawn my attention to other details that I have neglected. Hrdinský (talk) 17:29, 21 November 2008 (UTC)