User:VenerableBird/Androgyny in fashion/Eggen126 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(User:VenerableBird)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:VenerableBird/Androgyny_in_fashion?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Androgyny in fashion

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

They have added two time periods before the 1900s and added to the early 1900s section. The content is relevant and adds to the current article. There isn't any bias towards one topic. The content is sourced by the bibliography and has footnotes. Their content has one link to another Wikipedia page, so more would make it more discoverable. It is easy to read, but links to vocabulary we have learned in class might be helpful to those new to the subjects we learned. The content is organized well.