User:Venice Art/Carnival of Venice/Jen.ellis Peer Review

General info
Venice Art
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Venice Art/Carnival of Venice
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Carnival of Venice

Evaluate the drafted changes
For the portion added to the history section, I think it would be useful to make a separate description section for the painting so an in-depth description of the painting can be written. I also think it's important to remember that any interpretation of the painting —for instance when you say "there seems to be an important person sitting and communicating with the person next to them"—needs to be cited from an external source. In general, I also think the material added needs more citations within the writing. Based on the Carnival Masks and Disguises section, it looks like the material all comes from one source, but I think it would be helpful to either add in more citations to this source or pull information from multiple sources in case the your writing gets flagged for plagiarism. As a final note, I think your writing in this section is strong from an art historical perspective but it skews subjective with some of the language used (i.e. saying "vividly depicts this scene") which Wikipedia seems to discourage based on the guide material they've provided. Otherwise, good job!