User:Venrenerd/San Moisè, Venice/Clenakev Peer Review

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User:Venrenerd
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:User:Venrenerd/San Moisè, Venice
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):San Moisè, Venice

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Lead

- Yes, the lead has been updated

- it is overall concise and does well to highlight the article's different sections, however it provides new info not mentioned elsewhere for being one of the few Catholic churches named after Moses

Content

- the content added is relevant and up to date

Sources and References

- the article only uses one source and should opt for a greater diversity of sources

Organization

- it is overall well organized, but some sentences should be broken up and rewritten for sake of clarity, e.g., "Following the establishment of the Council of Trent, and then current Counter-Reformation movement that was occurring simultaneously within the Roman Catholic Church, the Church of San Moisè was rebuilt to adopt the demure interior trends of the Counter-Reformation and the ornate exterior trends of the Baroque era. Notable changes from this period include the transition to an open nave, and high altar inside the church and the all-marble, ornately decorated Baroque facade," are both clunky sentences and also need some grammatical fixes

Images and Media

- no images added

Overall Impressions

- good article overall with strong contributions contentwise, however it needs greater diversity in sources and some grammatical/syntax reworks